Stand, Fight
May 16, 2017
I tremble, with fear.
I feel it close in, so near.
Knees locked, I stand and quiver beyond eyesight.
Falsely ready to fight.
Steely complexion shining, a faulty glint.
Hands appear loose, fingertips clenched.
Desperately holding to something perhaps not meant.
Careful to guard, but behind shield,
I await, ready to yield.
Knock it down, out of hand.
Knock me down, no longer can stand,
The fright of a battle lost.
But ready to pay the cost of surrender.
If I will be held tender.
And the beat drums seize,
The grounds shaking cease.
Solace in tentative peace.
Jessica Donaldson
Oct 9, 2017 at 5:08 pm
Hello Jazzy,
First, I just want to say how amazing this poem was. I had to pick on for a school assignment and this one grabbed my attention right away. When I first read the poem I was thinking literally. I was thinking it was a poem about knights literally fighting each other. But then I kept reading, I kept digging and directing what you were trying to say and I realized it was so much more deeper than that. I loved how powerful the poem was and how I could really resonate with it. I could feel your vulnerability through the story. The story was much deeper than knights fighting. It was about in the face of fear and surrender, there is peace and stillness. The line that made me realize the deepness of this was, “Hands appear lose, fingertips clenched.” Even though you look weak and timid on the outside, behind the shield, within yourself, you are ready to fight and give it all you’ve got. The only feedback I have is expanding on what you really wanted the ready to understand, put the specifics throughout the poem. Other than that, I really enjoyed this poem. Thank you.
Irina
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Niani Mitchell
Oct 9, 2017 at 1:42 pm
Hello Jazzi Mason,
I would like to start off by saying that I really enjoyed poem. Your poem really spoke to me from personal experiences of myself. The line that I really found interesting was the line that said “falsely ready to fight”. I found this interesting because it relates to me in a way, it’s like putting up a mask and saying that you are ready to fight something but in reality you’re not and you’re still scared to face it. In the end three lines I was having trouble interpreting it and I don’t know what it means and I have an idea of what it means but I would like it to clarified.
Thank you!,
Niani Mitchell